User talk:65.189.53.133

Hi :) Could you please condense this article here. It's unnecessarily long and winding. Suggestions should get to the point, I actually tried to condense it but ran into a big wall when people showed an ignorant disagreement to the change. If there is no response within 24 hours then I will go ahead to make the changes. Thanks! (Terra Xin 13:31, 30 June 2008 (UTC))