User talk:68.17.182.187

Grammar?
You said:" Insert an apostrophe in "Im" (second sentence on your page). (+ "Ill"); you need a comma after "(first week max)" and a comma after the first "([...] hospitals)". You also need a comma after "Finally". Another comma is necessary after "ambitions", and "Hi all!" should be "Hi, all!". Capitalize the rest of "God walking amongst mere mortals" and take out the comma after "special weekends". For the Mad King Freebies info, you need to change "where" to "when". Ditto for Elder Freebies. Now to your "Guild Wars" section: "aorund" should be "around". Either take out the following comma or add "I" before "am" "

To this, I say:
 * I dont insert apostrophes because i dont want to.
 * You dont need a comma after first week max which is in brackets, because it is in brackets
 * I dont neeed a comma after the ambitions, i meant it that way
 * The comma is necessary after special weekends, otherwise it makes the sentence dull
 * Where isnt meant to be when, im refering to a place, not time.
 * There is no need to take out the comma, or add I before am.

Now, if you want to talk about the grammar on my page, make sure you know what you are talking about next time. --Burning Freebies 19:27, 20 July 2009 (UTC)